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Blog deleted. I guess, another dead wip.

Nooooooo i noticed too :( i hope it's just a revamp since the tags kept saying something was coming in x amount of days.

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Maybe that "something" was deleting the blog, heh. 

So many IFs stop being active that it doesn't surprise me anymore.

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A few things I've noticed right at the start:

  • MC is referred to as "$heshe" and "calen". (The former is clearly a bug, but the latter might be an unglossed term?)
  • Selecting a different font, doesn't actually change the font. (Changing the size does work though.)
  • Because the textbox has such high transparency, the patches of moonlight and reflection do not contrast sharply with the text.
  • The text box is already about half the width of the screen. Add to that the one inch margins inside the box, and the text takes up barely one third of the screen. This despite there not being any side panels using the two-thirds empty real estate (a toggled bottom panel having been used instead).

I cant play on mobile bro ;-;

pls mobile version

Hi! Can this be playable on Android phones? It's not really working well for me:/ the game looks really cool though! That's it thx

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guys why are people in the comments saying things that didn't happened in the demo? did the author changed it?

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hi! I did :) the previous demo is what they were referring to. I took a completely different route with it. Thanks for reading! :D

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oh,ok (ty for answering :D

no problem! :)

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Okay, So I feel like this is going to be really good !! I like it.

But right now, Every option, except for the flirting one, where you choose how to respond to Elex trying to get our attention; an error pops up. Some of the coding symbols are visible in the text. Also, if you choose to talk to her about the war, the conversation goes nowhere- like a loop, i guess. Idk how to explain it. 

It's like we get the options to talk about it, then it takes us back to the angel and war questions, to give us a chance to ask whatever one we didn't bring up before, But if we say "forget it" it's like we automatically didn't ask anything at all, even though you at least asked one of them. After that; like another comment said, it stops there. But i'm not sure if that's just where the demo ends or if that's a mistake.

Lastly, I saw you were sick, so I hope you get well soon!! Take your time.❣

Hi! Thank you for the feedback and well wishes, I really appreciate them!

I will definitely be looking into those today, especially with the war conversation as that seems to be the main one. I will post an update/patch when I have it figured out! 

Thank you!! And I hope you have a good day! πŸ™‚

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Hey, so at the part where you tell Elex to forget about the dream I’m stuck and cannot progress

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Same

Hi! Are you both able to see the page that has the two questions before the 'forget it.'? (Do you know anything about angels? What do you know of the past wars?)

Yes, i've tried just saying one of each question and only saying forget it. And i've tried telling her about the dreams and keeping them to myself with the same result.

I have the same result, I tried everything

same here any solutions?

Not anything that I know yet

same

same for me

Can light mode be added? Some white or beige background with black text? Combination of brown and gold makes it really hard to read πŸ˜…

Yes! It'll be added with the next patch. Thank you for the suggestion!! 😁

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you should add different fonts i cant read this one

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I am currently working on adding a selection of fonts! There will be a patch update with new fonts and backgrounds within the next couple weeks! Thank you for the suggestion!

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is this updated? :0

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Sorry about that but no update! I accidentally put the wrong file in the wrong space. Though, it is coming soon! πŸ‘€ Real soon...

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oh I see :) thnx for the reply. I'm low-key excited for the update now 😌 ✨

Android compatible?

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I am trying to make it where you can play on all devices! Right now, its only desktop compatible but within the next couple updates, you should be able to play on your phones. 😊

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Is this on hatius or will their be a update soon?

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There will be an update soon! I only have a couple more scenes to write and polish. Once that's done, I'll be able to code the rest in and post an update! Thank you for the interest! 

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Hello! I'm very interested in this IF, could someone tell me if there is a Tumblr Blog or another social media to follow the game's progress? Thanks in advance!

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https://legend-of-a-savior-if.tumblr.com/ Here’s their tumblr!

Thank you very much!

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awesome the demo is finally here!

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God I don't know how to say this... Ok uh. The name Urethia may be too close to the word "urethra".

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Yes! Lol, this was pointed out to me a few months ago when the previous demo was released. I was going to change it after it was pointed out but after discussing it with friends, we figured I would keep it. Just for the laughs lol. Thank you though!!

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I really need more of this. When is it going to update?

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Whoa- this is great so far!!! I can’t wait to be a grouch to every single character I meet!

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Daaaaaamn that was wonderfully hardcore and unexpected! Can't wait for more!

Thank you so much! :D

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Oooh this was so good! Can't wait to see more of it!!

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Thank you!! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :P

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Hope you keep it up. This could become the next Superstition.

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Ah, thank you! That means a lot to me. I'll try to make it as good as I can. :)

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You're killin' me, smalls.... Q.Q I can't wait to see more of this, epic work so far! By the way, that last page about the screaming; calling it now, bet they found an arachnid the size of a moose. (Kidding). XD

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Thank you so much!! And who knows? Maybe you're onto something... XD

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Ahaha, it's reasons like this why we hired Elix then. Not that I'm...y'know...afraid of moose-spiders or anything, she's just better at showing them what for. :P

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By the way, I hope it's alright to include this story on a list of recommendations I'm creating. It's really well done, so I wanted to mention it. ^_^ 

Yes, that's okay omg! I'm happy to know you think it's well done and want to recommend it! :D

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Does it really ends at "Until it suddenly becomes too much and you let out a scream of your own." or was the link to the next passage forgotten?

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It ends there for now! :D

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Can't wait to see the rest! Really good so far.